tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-208495608762298132.post1670549337531467069..comments2012-11-08T08:30:54.428-08:00Comments on My BLOG: Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09099404691160211001noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-208495608762298132.post-41360544682824470082012-10-17T07:46:31.519-07:002012-10-17T07:46:31.519-07:00Try to include dialogue, and give more descriptive...Try to include dialogue, and give more descriptive details. Gsweezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11488514186751213929noreply@blogger.com